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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the gender of Research
Students
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 from UK
universites
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universities
 by six science-related subjects in 2019.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 biology had the highest
number
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 of research
students
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,
while
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 veterinary medicine had the lowest.
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, male
students
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 outnumbered female
students
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 largely in physics. In detail, the most significant
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 in men can be seen in physics
which
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, which
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more
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is more
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 than four times in
woman
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women
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 at more than 200.The figures for
male
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males
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 in Astronomy
took up
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were
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 about 160
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, more
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 than twice the figures for
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females
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. The
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 of male
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 was twice the
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 of female
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 in geology, at about 160. Moving to the most
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number
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 in
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women
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 can be seen in biology about 240
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 the
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 in men was a bit lower at nearly 200. In comparison with
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males
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, the
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 of female
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 was about 35 higher than
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males
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 at 235.In veterinary medicine, the
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number
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 of female
students
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 was twice the
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 of male
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at
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 about 130.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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