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The two bar chart below show the propotion of 14-16 year old students studying a foreign language in an Enmglish spoken country and the top3 foreign languages.

The two bar chart below show the propotion of 14-16 year old students studying a foreign language in an Enmglish spoken country and the top3 foreign languages.
The two bar charts illustrate the percentage of boys and
girls
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 between the ages of 14 to 16 years old, who studied a foreign
language
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in
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between
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 1984 to 2007 in the country that uses English as their first
language
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,
whereas
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 the second one gives the information
of
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on
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 the top 3 languages studied by
themselves
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them
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.
Overall
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, it could be clearly seen that the
girls
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 were involved in learning
other languages
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languages other
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 than English.
Moreover
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,French has the most significant number among them. In 1984, almost 50% of
girls
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 studied a foreign
language
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,
furthermore
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 about 20% higher than those boys.
On the other
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 in 2007, the
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girls
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girls'
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 percentage dropped to 40% for choosing to learn a foreign
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whereas
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 for boys, the figure decreased
only
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by only
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 5%. As for the proportion of the most popular
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during
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in
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 1984, half of the students preferred French, which was roughly 45% higher than those who studied Spanish.
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, in 2007, French had become less popular, with only one-third of students joining
this
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language
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while
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 the proportion of Spanish
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 doubled. Respectfully German, between nearly 15% to 20% studied on it

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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