The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
The map depicts how
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the office building layout
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to change in the future.
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, the office became less eco-friendly and greenery will
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. At present, the office building features grass on both the left and right sides of the дфнщге. Inside, the upper section contains a kitchen, canteen, and storeroom, with washrooms situated in the top-right corner. The central section is divided into four small offices, accessible through three separate entrances,
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the main entrance is located centrally at the bottom.
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the future plan, the grass areas will be removed and replaced by an outdoor seating area on the left and additional offices on the right. The kitchen and canteen will be removed entirely, making space for a meeting area in the lower right corner and an open seating space with chairs in the lower left. The storeroom and WCs will remain,
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a coffee machine will be installed next to the washrooms.
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, the layout will feature larger open-plan offices
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of smaller individual ones,
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entrances will be slightly repositioned to fit the new design.

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