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Writing Samples
Band 4

“The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Now days people like to
study
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teacher
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an important
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word
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study it
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,
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. Now
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now
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now,
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talks
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study
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 it because it
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teachers
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 have a great job if they are fluent in the vocabulary. People choose native
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it's
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them
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their
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language
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childhood. They know how to write and read
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, a professor from
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 won't do a mistake any
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be essential to the local tutors
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 more ability to teach their
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, the person
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 to teach others because he thinks it is correct .
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 my opinion, I think we should
study
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native
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planning
Plan before you write. Make a short plan with 2 or 3 main ideas to prove your view.
structure
Make a clear statement of your view in the first line.
organization
Use one idea per paragraph. Start with a small sentence to state the idea and finish with a short end.
linking
Use linking words to connect ideas, like 'also', 'but', 'so', 'because'.
examples
Give exact examples that are easy to see for a reader and fit the idea.
grammar
Check grammar and spelling of easy words; fix errors that change meaning.
content
The writer gives a clear view and some reasons.
content
There is an attempt to use examples to support the view.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • agree
  • think
  • point
  • reason
  • example
  • learn
  • English
  • native
  • teacher
  • practice
  • pronunciation
  • listening
  • speaking
  • vocabulary
  • grammar
  • feedback
  • confidence
  • culture
  • real
  • talk
  • class
  • online
  • exchange
  • balance
  • plan
  • cost
  • time
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