The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.

The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.
The two maps illustrate changes in the rural area of
Stamdorf
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Stamford
in England between 1985 and 2015.
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, the area underwent major redevelopment, with the addition of housing estates, an expansion of industrial facilities, and the replacement of some infrastructure,
while
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the river and main
road
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remained unchanged. In 1985, the northeast contained a large factory next to Arlington
Road
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,
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three small roadside inns were located nearby. A field occupied the northwest, and a wooden bridge crossed the river. By 2015,
this
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landscape had transformed considerably. The factory was redeveloped into a wider industrial zone with oil facilities, and a staff quarter was constructed to the north. The wooden bridge was replaced with a steel one,
while
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the roadside inns remained in the same place. At the same time, residential development expanded. A housing estate was built in the southwest, and another appeared in the southeast near Arlington
Road
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.
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, more trees were planted around the field and in the southern part of the map, creating a greener environment. Despite these changes, the Thames River and the main
road
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layout were preserved.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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