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Writing Samples
Band 4

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that reading from
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a formatted
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 book will
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 in
next
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the next
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 years. Nowadays ,
people
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will tended
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tend
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 to read
news
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 from the
websits istead
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websites instead
 of buying
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magazines from the markets. In my opinion, I prefer to read the
news
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 from my laptop because it is easy to
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 and friendly to
environment
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the environment
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 . First and foremost,
people
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 like reading
news
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 and
every thing
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everything
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 they need to learn online .
That
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is
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mean
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means
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, they find a lot of advantages with
this
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phinomenon
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phenomenon
.The
signifigant
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significant
 reason is
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a frienly
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frienly
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friendly
 environment ,
due to
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people
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 will not throw
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apply
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book
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books
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 or newspapers
away
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away,
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 so we save our
invironment
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environment
 from
pulliotion
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pollution
.
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, statistics by
UK
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the UK
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center
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centre
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 in 2020
,
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found a gradual
decreased
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decrease
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 in
wastes
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waste
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 that
citizins throwed
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citizens threw
 in bins
approximately
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, approximately
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 40% .
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, another benefit is
save
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saving
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 money and
easy
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being easy
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 to have. That means we can read
any thing every where
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anything everywhere
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 and every time we need with
easier
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an easier
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 way .
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, when I went to my university by tramway ,I read the daily
news
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 using my phone without looking for
aplase
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a place
 where
buying
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buy
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 newspapers and spending money .
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 prefer reading from
traditional
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a traditional
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 newspaper because they like the smell of paper and like holding the book
on
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in
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 their hands.
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, my
grand father
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grandfather
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like
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likes
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 having newspapers every morning with drinking cup of coffee because he
find
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finds
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this
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 situation
is relax
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relaxing
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 and healthy
to
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for
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 his eyes. In conclusion, some
people
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 will stay reading from traditional ways because they like it , and others will develop their reading way using websites by saving time and money.

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task
Be clear on your view at the start and say how far you agree in one line.
structure
Use one idea in each paragraph. Start with the main point in the first sentence of each paragraph.
coherence
Use simple linking words like first, also, but, and finally to tie ideas.
language
Check your spelling and grammar. Many words are wrong or used in a wrong way.
examples
Give one or two good examples that fit the task and are easy to read.
content
There is a real view and some use of examples.
structure
Some good effort to place ideas in order.
content
You plan to show both sides of the idea.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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