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Nowadays, many teachers use technology in class. Is this a positive or negative development.

There is no denying the fact that
technology
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 nowadays is essential for educational methods.
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 it is a commonly held belief that
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 the
technology
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 is useful for students in
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 by
teachers
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. There is
also
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 an argument that
oppses
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opposes
 it. In
this
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essey
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essay
 will discuss both points and
i
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 will express
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my
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poinion
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opinion
.
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 one hand, many
teachers
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using
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use
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technology
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imrove
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improve
 their outcome of
students
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their students
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. It is
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 possible to say the
technology
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 will help
teachers
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 to
insure
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ensure
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 the
informations
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information
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inderstood
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understood
.
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moreover
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, some of
courses
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the courses
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 their teacher
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little
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a little
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 difficult
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to
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axplain
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explain
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of
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in
formation
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for
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 processes and specific
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human
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the human
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 body ( anatomy ).
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 the
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imrpove
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improve
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procceses
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processes
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student
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students
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 and
easir
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easier
way
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apply
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to understand.
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other
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the other
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 hand, some people
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that
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it is
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negative
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a negative
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 way to teach
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student
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students
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by
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with
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technology
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of
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students
using
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 the
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for
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to
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 solve their homework and
presentation
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presentations
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which
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 will lead male the
teachers
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 is not sure
if
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whether
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student
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students
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if
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undetstand
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understand
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not
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.
some
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individiuals
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individuals
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believe
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if
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that if
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student
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students
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 spend more time
for searching
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searching for
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about
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apply
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specific information without
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 help
it
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better
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be better
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. In conclusion,
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this
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 question, on
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balance
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however
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,
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 tend to believe that the
technology
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 is
helpfull
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helpful
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eductional
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educational
 methods and in the future will increase
rate
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the rate
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 of usage
the
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technology
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grammar
Fix many spelling and word form mistakes; use short, clear sentences.
organization
Use a clear essay plan: one intro with your view, two body parts with one idea each, and a short conclusion.
lexical
Use common, simple words and check noun and verb use. Avoid hard words and long forms.
task response
State your view in the intro and restate it in the conclusion; keep to the task.
content balance
The writer tries to discuss both sides of the topic.
examples present
There are some ideas on how tech can help learning.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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