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The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Number of patients to four clinics in one hospital

The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Number of patients to four clinics in one hospital
The line graph illustrates information about the number of average weekly
visits
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 of patients to four different
clinics
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 of one hospital, namely
birth
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control
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, eye, diabetic and dental. The period is given from 2010 to 2016.
Overall
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, all
clinics
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 except
birth
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control
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 demonstrate an increase in the volume of appointments.
While
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 the frequency of
visits
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due to
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 dental reasons fluctuated slightly, the eye and diabetic
clinics
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 showed steady growth in quantity throughout the period. The clients' turnover in the eye
clinics
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 started with approximately 130 patients, followed by a gradual rise to 150
visits
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 in 2012. After that year, the figure climbed significantly to 350 appointments , indicating the highest point on the diagram.
However
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,
while
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 the
visits
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due to
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birth
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control
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 matters indicated the maximum quantity of nearly 250 patients in 2010, after a noticeable fluctuation within the next 2 years, it declined insignificantly to just below 250.
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, diabetic and dental reasons for visiting were the smallest numbers during the period.
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 the dental fluctuated
similarly
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 to the figure of
birth
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control
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 appointments (from 100 to nearly 130), the diabetic rose moderately from around 60 to 170
visits
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visits, clinics, birth, control with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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