“In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?”

There is an ongoing debate about the best mode of transportation across the world. Some countries have taken measures to make public transport the major means of commuting, as against the

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of private cars. I think

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is a good move and I am strongly in support of it. I believe

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policy is more advantageous than its demerits.

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in support of my position, the

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of municipal buses causes less traffic congestion within the cities. In Lagos,

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, the public buses have their separate routes that

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have fewer motorists

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would have made movement across the cities

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slower.

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of

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, people will reach their destinations in good time. Next is the issue of air pollution, which is a product of fumes from

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vehicles

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. These gases, in

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addition

to depleting the protective atmospheric layer of the earth,

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cause

serious respiratory illnesses.

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, in Japan, the

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gaseous

emissions from

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cause so much air contamination that it appears like a fog. The

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of commercial buses will prevent

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from

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occurring

as there will be fewer

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,

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, some have argued that using personal cars affords the owners flexibility

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that they can go wherever they want, at

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convinience

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convenience

.

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is true, with public

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plying several routes and having multiple schedules,

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challenge can

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. To wrap it up, the

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of public means of transportation holds enormous

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it creates a cleaner environment and a

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healthier

society. I support

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policy and hope that more countries will

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adopt

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it across the world.

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, efforts must be made to

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alleviate

some of the drawbacks in order to make it more efficient.