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Writing Samples
Band 5

You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to tge restaurant owner.

Dear
sir
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Sir
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, I am XYZ, living nearby at ABC Street near
Taj
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the Taj
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 restaurant. I
writing
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am writing
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this
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 letter to express my concern towards the noise made by your place.
Firstly
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, I am a student and a part-time worker
,
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;
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thus
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, my study time is scheduled
nearly
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around 10pm after work.
However
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,
due to
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 the loud
sound
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sound,
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 my mind got distracted and
i
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I
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 am not able to focus well. Other than
this
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, there are lots of aged people residing
at
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in
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nearest
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the nearest
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 locations. I
heared alot
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heard a lot
 of complaints from them about
increase
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an increase
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 in hearing issues among most of them. So I request
to
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that to
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 look into the matter urgently. For
that
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that,
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i
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I
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 can suggest
you
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that you
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to
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apply
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arrange padded walls of fabric that
does
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do
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 not allow the loud music to cross the wall.
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, you can use soft and pleasant music after 10pm
instead
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 of
high beat
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 songs. I have been struggling with
this
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 issue for
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last
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the last
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 few weeks.
Thus
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,
i
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I
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 urge you to take active actions
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; other
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other
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other,
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wise i
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I
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 have to report to higher authorities
fir
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for
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 other people's welfare too. Yours faithfully, XYZ

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grammar
Fix 'i' to 'I' and other cap rules. Use simple, correct spelling.
structure
Split long idea into one thought per paragraph. Use new paragraph each time you change idea.
tone
Be clear and polite. State your need first, and then what you want the owner to do.
vocabulary
Keep short sentences. Use easy words to make the letter easy to read.
content
End with a clear action and a polite closing.
impact
The writer shows care for neighbours and health.
content
The letter asks for a concrete change after 10pm.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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