Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, increasing demand has made it a global problem. What are the causes of this growing demand? What can governments and individuals do to respond to the problem?

Healthy

water

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is very limited in some nations like

suadn

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Sudan

Affrica

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Africa

, and other

countres

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countries

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According

to HWO (Health

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water

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Water

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orgnaization

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Organisation

)

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it became a common issue

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our planet.

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, many people argue that the

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cause

this

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major

proplem

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problem

is the huge growth in the oil and gas

industri

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industry

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addition

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addition,

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alot

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a lot

of the top

company

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companies

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such

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apply

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Aramco,

sabik

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, plus other

enamoras

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enormous

copmanys

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companies

in the

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has

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have

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a big

inpact

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impact

this

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subject.

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furthermore

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The

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incerase

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increase

of H2S and other

petrochimicales

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petrochemicals

has

also

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effected

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affected

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the

water

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health.

However

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Acourding

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According

to many

reasurch

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researchers

individuals

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, individuals

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desbite

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despite

being minor to

this

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matter, but they can

collabrate

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collaborate

together to solve

this

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proplem

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problem

in many ways

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, like

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stop wasting good

water

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, only use it in

showring

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showering

and drinking.

Also

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, teaching

thier

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their

kids the

importnce

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importance

of good

water

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. In my opinion, Healthy

water

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issue is a major

proplem

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problem

and must be

solve

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. Both governments,

Companys

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companies

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and

Indivisuals

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individuals

need to work together to find

solution

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a solution

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because

damged

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damaged

water

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can impact badly

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our health and

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apply

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the Environment.

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Aug 19, 2025

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task

Plan your answer in 3 parts: small intro, 2 or 3 main ideas with a light link, short end. Put causes first and then what to do.

coherence

Make ideas flow by using links like 'also', 'and', 'but' in a simple way. Put each idea in a line.

grammar

Use clear spell and grammar. Check words like 'water' and 'problem' so readers can read easy.

content

The essay shows a view that water issue is big and needs fix.

content

The writer tries to give ideas for cause and fix.

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
44
Grammar mistakes
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Industrialization
Agricultural irrigation
Urbanization
Climate change
Drought
Water pollution
Water-saving technologies
Water-intensive diets
Regulations
Water conservation
Awareness campaigns
Subsidies
Incentives
Desalination
Rainwater harvesting
Transboundary water resources
Sustainable
Efficient appliances

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Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, increasing demand has made it a global problem. What are the causes of this growing demand? What can governments and individuals do to respond to the problem?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be reason for this what would you suggest as a solution?

Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

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