The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart compares how often Americans ate at fast
food
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restaurants in 2003, 2008, and 2013.
Overall
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, visiting a fast
food
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restaurant once a week or once or twice a month was most common,
while
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eating there every day or never
were
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least common. In 2003, about 30% of people ate fast
food
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once a week, and a similar proportion
around
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, around
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30
%
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%,
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ate there once or twice a month. By
2008
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2008,
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the share
eating
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of people eating
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once a week rose to about 33%,
whereas
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the once-or-twice-a-month group fell slightly. By
2013
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2013,
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the pattern changed
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roughly 33% of people ate fast
food
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once or twice a month in the largest group,
while
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the once-a-week category dropped to around 27%. The “several times a week” category, which was 20% in 2008, fell to about 15% by 2013. Less frequent categories like “a few times a year” and “never” remained low at roughly 10–15% and 3–5%, respectively. Daily consumption stayed under 5%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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