The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the frequency in terms of American
people
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who ate at fast
food
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restaurants in the years 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Overall
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, the frequency of eating at fast
food
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restaurant
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restaurants
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once a week and once or twice a month accounted for the largest proportion in
USA
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the USA
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, at roughly 33%.
Whereas
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, consuming it
everyday
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every day
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took up the lowest share. It
at
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is
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around 2.5%. The percentage of
people
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who ate fast
food
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once a week stood at 31% in 2003 and rose slightly to 33% in 2006 before falling to 27% in 2013. A similar pattern can be observed in
people
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who consumed fast
food
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several times a week, rising from 17% in 2003 to 20% in 2006 before falling to 16% in 2013.
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,
while
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the opposite trend can be seen in
people
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eating it once or twice a month, falling from 30% in 2003 to 25% in 2006 before rising to 33% in 2013. The share of fast
food
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consuming everyday undergo a marginal decrease from 4% in 2003 to 3.25% in 2006,
then
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remained stable between 2006 and 2013 at around.
The
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A
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similar trend can be noticed in
people
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never
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who never
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ate it during the same period, from 5% to 4%.
By contrast
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,
a
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the
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opposite can be observed in fast
food
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consuming a few times a year
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consumption
, from 12.5% to 15%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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