The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
The diagram illustrates a method for generating electricity by utilising the ocean's temperature difference, known as Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). It
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shows how the same process yields drinking
water
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.
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, the system involves three stages
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harnessing of solar energy, evaporation, and condensation.
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, the process relied on temperature contrast between warm surface
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used (around 29 degrees Celsius) and cold deep seawater (approximately 5 degrees Celsius) drawn from a depth of up to 1000 meters.
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, surface seawater is heated by the sun to about 29 degrees Celsius and
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transferred to an evaporation chamber. Here, salt is removed and the
water
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evaporates, producing
vapour
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that passes through a turbine. The movement of
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vapour
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drives the turbine to produce electricity. In the next stage, the
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travels down a pipe into a condensing chamber, where it is cooled by deep seawater circulating around the chamber.
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, the
vapour
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condenses into pure drinking
water
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,
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the salt is returned to the sea.

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