The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the
number
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of visitors visiting a specific Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, we can see that the
number
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of travellers is increasing throughout the years,
as well as
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,
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the
number
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of visitors staying on the cruise ships and
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contrasts
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with the
number
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of people who are staying on the
island
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, who decline a little bit,
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rises again.
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, holidaymakers on the ship
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0.5
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in 2010. But slightly grew to half 1
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in 2011.
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decline again in 2012, but after
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we can notice a significant growth in 2012 to reach 1
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and in 2014 , exceeding visitors staying on the
island
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in 2016 with 1.5
million
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and
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to grow to reach 2
million
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in 2017. On the
otherhand
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, the
number
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of travellers who are staying on the
island
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state the same at the beginning between 2002 and 2011. Gradually increased to 1.5
million
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in 2013,
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decreased again in 2015, to rose again in 2017 to reach 1.5
million
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again.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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