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The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from ‎‎1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the ‎five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over ‎the same period.‎ Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ‎make comparisons where relevant.‎

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from ‎‎1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the ‎five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over ‎the same period.‎ Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ‎make comparisons where relevant.‎
The tables illustrate how the
population
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 of New York City and its five regions has ‎changed between 1800 and 2000.‎
Overall
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, the city's total
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 rose significantly over the two centuries.
This
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 ‎growth corresponds to the increase in
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 of Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and ‎Staten Island,
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Manhattan
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's
population
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 peaked in 1900, before declining.‎ In 1800, New York City's
population
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 was 79,216, with
Manhattan
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 accounting for the ‎vast majority of
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population
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the population
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 at 60,515 (76% of
total
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the total
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population
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). The cumulative ‎
population
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 of other districts was notably lower at 18,701 (24% of
total
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the total
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population
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).‎ In 1900, the total
population
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 grew to 3,437,202.
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Manhattan
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's
population
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 ‎almost doubled, reaching 1,850,093, its percentage of
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the total
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population
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 fell to 54%, ‎as the other districts sharply grew to 1,587,109 (46% of
total
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the total
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).‎ In 2000, the total
population
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 peaked at 8,009,185.
Manhattan
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's figure decreased to ‎‎1,538,096 (19% of
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the total
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),
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 Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island ‎experienced a considerable jump to 6,471,089 people, comprising 81% of the total.‎

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, manhattan with synonyms.
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