In recent times many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative effects on society?

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a quite a lot of
people
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want to live alone
from
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for
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a lot of reasons. In
this
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essay
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happen
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.
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Also
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positive or negative effects. Many
people
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live
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apply
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take
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make
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decisions to live alone
why
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, why
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? Cause a few things.
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,they
are in
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have
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a problem with their family.
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,
person
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a person
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have
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has
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reagular
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regular
issues with his dad because of
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or
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, or
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the dad
want
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wants
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to
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him to
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let his do something he doesn't want like go to family occasions.
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secondly
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, maybe
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they
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want to feel
independently
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or something like that.
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the other hand, there are many effects on
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apply
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society.
one
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of them ,
the
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that
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people
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will not have a place or house to live because of
lack
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a lack
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of places the
people
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can live
there
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apply
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. Maybe some
people
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will be homeless. There
is
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are
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a lot of reasons . There is another way to live alone .
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, take a floor and do it like a flat and live
there
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there,
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it's more helpful In the end, I think
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decision
a
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negative effect on the person and on the society Because
the
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of the
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reason I
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said
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before, imagine that you are sick in your own house and they are no one
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who
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answers your call. It's a bad idea.

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idea
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • autonomy
  • urbanization
  • social norms
  • digital communication
  • isolation
  • financial stability
  • personal development
  • changing values
  • communal living
  • career advancement
  • housing availability
  • loneliness
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