You bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchases Write an e ail to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your e Letter, give detail of the purchase describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to complain about the product quality in a recent purchase from your company.

Last

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week, on the 1st of August, my family visited one of your company's

outlet

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outlets

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located on Dixi Road.

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purchased three different pairs of hiking t-shirts, which

includes

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include

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rock climbing and camping. The

overall

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cost was about $1000, which was paid

through

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cash.

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with, upon returning

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apply

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home, I found that two of the t-shirts

quality

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apply

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was very poor because

threads

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the threads

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were coming apart from the sleeves. It was really frustrating for us to find

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problem just before leaving for our trip to the Rocky Mountains.

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, I would kindly request you to get us a full refund in cash, I certainly do not have much time to wait for

online

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an online

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refund,

neither

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nor

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I can

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can I

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buy another piece. I look forward

hearing

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to hearing

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back from you

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this

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matter. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Ali

alyshan.maredia

Aug 23, 2025

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task

Be clear about what you want. The letter asks for a refund, but you were asked for a replacement.

language

Fix grammar and form. Use proper capitalization and keep sentences clear when you write.

structure

Keep one idea per paragraph and link ideas with simple words like and or but.

tone

Polite tone and good formal style.

details

Gives details of purchase (date, place, items, price).

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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