The pie chart below gives information on the main reasons to visit public libraries in the UK in 1991 and 2000

The pie chart shows information about the individuals using in public

library

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and the main reasons for visiting in the UK in two different years.

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it is clear that

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the

most

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apply

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main reason that people go to the

library

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for

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borrow or return

book

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books

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in both 1991 and 2000. In 1991, the figure consisted of four factors

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1991.

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, in 2000, a new cause was added to the list of those factors

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apply

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2000 which was named with borrow or return

videos

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. In terms of borrowing or returning

book

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books

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, 65% of people visited the

library

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for

this

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purpose in 1991, and that was the highest proportion among all

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4 factors, and

then

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it dropped in 2000 by 55%. The two reasons

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, like

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studying and reading newspapers or

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magazines

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magazine

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magazine,

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were estimated

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10% and 15% in 1991,

then

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experienced a slight decline in 2000 by 2% and 5%, respectively.

According to

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the chart, the percentage of

obtain

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apply

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information

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obtained in

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1991 was 10%, and

then

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in 2000 showed a slight rise and doubled to 20%.

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, the

library

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offered a new cause

which

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, which

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called

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was called

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videos

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, and there were no

videos

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in 1991. Despite that fact, in 2000,

borrow

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borrowing

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return

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returning

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videos

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was recorded by 18%.

omar.alguribi

Aug 23, 2025

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, videos with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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