The pie chart below gives information on the main reasons to visit public libraries in the UK in 1991 and 2000

The pie chart below gives information on the main reasons to visit public libraries in the UK in 1991 and 2000
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below gives information on the main reasons to visit public libraries in the UK in 1991 and 2000
The pie chart shows information about the individuals using in public
library
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and the main reasons for visiting in the UK in two different years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
most
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main reason that people go to the
library
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is
for
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to
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borrow or return
book
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books
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in both 1991 and 2000. In 1991, the figure consisted of four factors
in
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1991.
However
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, in 2000, a new cause was added to the list of those factors
in
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2000 which was named with borrow or return
videos
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. In terms of borrowing or returning
book
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books
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, 65% of people visited the
library
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for
this
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purpose in 1991, and that was the highest proportion among all
the
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4 factors, and
then
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it dropped in 2000 by 55%. The two reasons
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, like
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studying and reading newspapers or
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magazines
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magazine
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magazine,
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were estimated
by
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at
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10% and 15% in 1991,
then
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experienced a slight decline in 2000 by 2% and 5%, respectively. 
According to
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the chart, the percentage of
obtain
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information
in
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obtained in
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1991 was 10%, and
then
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in 2000 showed a slight rise and doubled to 20%.
In contrast
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, the
library
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offered a new cause
which
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, which
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called
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was called
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videos
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, and there were no
videos
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in 1991. Despite that fact, in 2000,
borrow
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borrowing
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or
return
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returning
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videos
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was recorded by 18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, videos with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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