many students around the world are not choosing scinece subjects at university. Give reasons for that ? what are the impacts on society ? write an essay of 250 word in length

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many subjects to choose from
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as science.
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some students think
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a hard subject. The reason students avoid science other
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it's a hard subject there is
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long
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work .
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when you take the
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it takes 3 hours
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without the
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be a weaker economy.
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there will not be
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a good employee or a smart one to invite something new . It might be
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fewer
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or
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the country. In
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the important thing the professor must be kind and better
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for students.
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the parents should
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child and have some support for them .

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structure
Use clear order. Start with one main idea in each paragraph and keep one idea per sentence.
linking
Use linking words like first, also, but, for example, to link ideas.
task
Answer all parts. Explain why students avoid science and how it changes society with more detail.
language
Check grammar. Use short, correct sentences.
examples
Add real and simple examples to support points.
idea
The text shows a clear view that science can be hard.
structure
Intro and conclusion are present.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • many
  • students
  • world
  • do
  • not
  • choose
  • science
  • subjects
  • at
  • university
  • reasons
  • will
  • affect
  • society
  • hard
  • math
  • lab
  • work
  • cost
  • time
  • jobs
  • pay
  • future
  • role
  • models
  • teaching
  • schools
  • technology
  • medicine
  • growth
  • inequality
  • fix
  • easier
  • learn
  • parents
  • leaders
  • policy
  • exposure
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