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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent times,
images
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 as photographs and films are becoming
more
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a more
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 powerful way of
communication
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 as compared to written words.
This
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In
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in
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 subsequent paragraphs. First of all,
images
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 and videos have become more effective in
communication
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 because
it
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they
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makes
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make
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 interpretation easier.These pictures and films are easily
interpretated
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interpreted
 by viewers
making
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, making
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 understanding
more
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apply
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easier.
For instance
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,movies
showed
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shown
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 in cinemas which are
educative
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educational
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 to both children and adults are easily understood by viewers.A study conducted
in
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at
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 Cape
coast
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Coast
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 University
reavealed
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revealed
 that
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apply
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visualized
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visual
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form
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forms
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 of
communication
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is
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are
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 more powerful as compared to written words.
This
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 study clearly shows how powerful
images
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 are in terms of
communication
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.
Additionally
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,another reason why
images
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 are powerful is because of how interesting they make
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.
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interesting.
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Using visuals to talk to people
is
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plays a crucial role in making conversation interesting.
This
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 is because people like to see beautiful things.
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example,
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 in the education sector.Children aged between 5 and 13 find it more interesting when they are being taught with pictures and videos.
As a result
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,they perform very well in their
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 exams
unlike
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, unlike
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reading
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reading,
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 where kids normally find it boring. In a nutshell,communicating with
images
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 is more powerful
due to
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 how easy and interesting it makes conversations.
Therefore
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,the writer strongly agrees with the statement that interacting with visual displays is
undoubtfully
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undoubtedly
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 powerful.

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task response
Task response: Have a clear plan. Say your view at once. Give 2 or 3 clear reasons with simple examples. End with a short line that restates your view.
coherence cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Link ideas well. Start each paragraph with a clear idea. Use simple join words like first, also, then. Check spelling and grammar so the read is easy.
task response
The writer shows a clear view that images can be stronger than words.
coherence cohesion
There are linking words that help the flow of ideas.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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