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The charts below show the proportions of the world's oíl resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oíl resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides data regarding the percentages of the global
oil
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 resources in different areas,
along with
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 the
proportions
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 of their annual consumption there.
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,
it is clear that
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 by far the most significant provider of
oil
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 in the world is the Middle East, with Canada
,
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 and Central/South
America
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 in the second and
the
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third place. It is
also
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 evident that Asia,the United States, and Western Europe consume the highest
proportions
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 of
this
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 fuel. Focusing first on the
proportions
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 of the world's
oil
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 resources, over half of
oil
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, 56.52% is held in the Middle East,
whereas
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 the total proportion for Canada and Central/South
America
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 is approximately half as much, nearly 23%. Regarding Eastern Europe and Africa, they store between 6.58% and 6.38% of
oil
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. Turning to the use of
this
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 fuel, the highest
proportions
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, 26,21%, 25.48%, and 19.24% of
oil
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 are consumed by Asia,
America
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, and Western Europe, respectively. Notably, these figures are significantly higher
from
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than
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 the percentages for its major providers, the Middle East, Canada, and Central/South
America
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, at between 2.5% and 6.70%. The remaining countries use from 1.3% to 6.56% of
world's
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the world's
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oil
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, proportions, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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