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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.
The table illustrates the daily
oil
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production
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 in four African countries between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
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, Nigeria, Chad, and Somalia experienced upward trends in their
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 outputs,
while
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 Congo showed a steady decline.
Although
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 Congo was the largest producer in 2000, Nigeria overtook it by 2004.
To begin
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 with, Chad had no
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production
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 from 2000 to 2002, but its output rose sharply from zero to 50,000
barrels
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 per day in 2004. Nigeria’s figures dropped from 205,000
barrels
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 in 2000 to 190,000 in 2002, before increasing significantly to 213,000 by the end of the period.
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, Somalia’s
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production
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 grew steadily, rising from 5,000
barrels
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 per day in 2000 to 50,000 in 2004. As for Congo,
production
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 fell consistently from 275,000
barrels
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 in 2000 to 203,000
barrels
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 in 2004, despite remaining the leading producer until Nigeria surpassed it.

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