You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

Dear yoga, How is your holiday going so far? I hope you are having
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want to tell you about an accident that happened
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was cooking in the kitchen. As you
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could cook something when you were away. So
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was checking the
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found a chicken breast and
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cooked them all. At the
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already set the timer for 20 minutes. After
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got bored because it took so long, so
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left your kitchen and
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a movie in your living room. The timer is ringing
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cannot hear it because the sound from
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loud and the pan got burned. To solve
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bought the new pan from
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marketplace because it more cheaper than
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. The package will arrive tomorrow morning. So the pan will be ready before you come. I really
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about
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hope you will forgive me
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what
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did. I will be more careful in future. Can wait for your response Best regards, Miki

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structure
Be clear on the plan. Say what happened, when it happened, and what you will do to fix it.
grammar
Use simple past for what happened and present for plans. Check i vs I.
tone
You say sorry and you show a plan to fix.
content
The letter tells what you will do to fix and when the new pan will come.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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