You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.

Dear, Lisa Hey! How is your holiday going? I hope you are having fun in the Netherlands. Anyway, I want to tell you something about my clumsiness that happened just yesterday. Yesterday, I went straight to your house after my working schedule finished. It is about 5pm when I arrived at your house. I felt so sleepy because I woke up really early yesterday morning. But that night, I had so much work to do. Despite going to sleep, I decided to walk around your kitchen and search for coffee to keep me awake. I opened the refrigerator and found your leftover Starbucks coffee in a big bottle. I knew I could not drink that much coffee, so I went to the dining room, looking for a cup, and poured it. But

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is where it happened. Maybe because I was so sleepy and out of focus, I poured it too much, and it spilt on your new rug. I was so shocked, and I tried to clean it up, but the stain

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left. I know

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is really upsetting for you, but I already searched the shop that sells that same rug. I already found the shop, and

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it is not that far from my office. So I will buy it tomorrow evening after work. I am really sorry for what has already happened. I know that it was my fault, and I will be more careful next time. I hope you will forgive me for my clumsiness. Looking forward to hearing from you, Best Regards, Jk

Aug 31, 2025

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structure

Make ideas clear: say the accident, when it was and how you fix it in small steps.

style

Use short lines and keep lines short to help read ease.

coherence

Put one main idea in each part.

tone

You say sorry and you plan to fix it.

content

You tell when it was and what you did next.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

260 words

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knocked over
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You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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