You organised a birthday party at your place and borrowed something from your friend for the same. But it was damaged at the party. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, describe what it was how it was damaged what you will do about it

Dear Lisa, Hey Lis, how are you? I hope you are doing well. You know, when I borrowed your box of

glass

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two days ago? I used it for my drinking party with my family

last

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night. I want to tell you that one of your

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glass

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is broken. Well, how it was damaged is a part of my clumsiness. It happened when I was a little drunk and

unconsiously

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unconsciously

dropped it on the floor. Fortunately, because of its quality, the

glass

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was not shattered

but

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it has a little dent in its corner. I am really sorry for

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accident

and

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I promise that I will buy you a new

glass

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. But the thing is, I do not know where to buy it. Could you tell me where is the place to buy that kind of

glass

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? Just send me the location and I will drive to the shop by myself. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Jk

jocelinjocel

Aug 31, 2025

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structure

Separate ideas into clear blocks: one about what you borrowed, one about how it broke, and one about what you will do next.

format

paragraphing

Put one idea in each paragraph and make the gap between topics clear.

content

Be clear about what you will do to fix the item and where to buy it; add any small detail if you can.

tone

Keep a calm, honest tone; avoid too much detail about being drunk for a letter to a friend.

tone

You say sorry and take the blame.

content

You tell what you will do to fix it.

content

You ask for the place to buy the item.

style

The tone is warm and friendly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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