Some people say that world travel benefits everyone,regardless of age. Other people claim that only those over a certain age should experience global travel. How far do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that travelling is acceptable only for certain ages, not for everyone. In my view, people of different generations should try and taste global travelling around the world for reasons which I will outline in the following essay.

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visiting new places and countries and giving a lot of emotions and knowledge about the culture, it is

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very popular to travel for food, to taste different national cuisines.

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, all of these benefits could try anyone, from a very young age and be satisfied with the trip,

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emotions which stay in memory for a long time.

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, I had my first trip when I was 3 years old. My family were in Turkey, from the photo which I got from that time, I was cheerful.

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, travelling with a little child can cause troubles for parents, but it is an excellent experience for him

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it should not be a mistake to bring him with.

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, little children would not memorise and can cause difficulties in the plane or during the holidays, because they need a lot of attention.

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, old people

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have problems with planes, in order to risks like reduced oxygen or blood clots.

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, once on the plane, I saw when someone's grandmother had trouble with her heart , and I was scared for her, for them

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is very challenging to travel in

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way. In conclusion, I believe that bringing with you children or parents

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would not be a mistake, they

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want to see the world and try something new. Travelling is for everyone with no exceptions about age.

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Topic is answered with a clear view, but some points are not well developed.

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Body ideas are connected with basic linking words; some transitions are weak.

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Use more specific examples and explain how they support your view.

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Structure is OK: intro, body, conclusion; keep paragraphs focused.

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Clear position on the issue.

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Good use of linking words in places.

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