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You are planning a dinner party where you intend to werve a traditional dish from your foreign friend's country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say why you're planning a party explain why you intend to serve this dish invite him/her to the party

Dear Maks, I am planning a dinner
party
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 where I intend to serve a traditional dish from my friend’s country of origin. I am writing to express my appreciation for the cool recipe for cooking Argentine meat. I am planning a dinner in
honor
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honour
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 of passing my driving test. Date of the event: June 8th
in
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, in
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 the restaurant on Dr. Weinberg Street 7. I would be grateful if you could join me at my
party
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. I would like you to help me prepare unbelievable.
This
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 is Argentina’s meat. Because you know how to cook
this
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 meat. You are from Argentina. At the
party
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 will be a lot of people whom you can see with me, which will be
funny
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. We were both to study at the University. So, I will be waiting for you at my
party
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. I'm looking forward to it. I would be grateful if you could call me to let me know that you will be. Best Regards, Artyom Gendlin

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content
Make the purpose clear at the start. State why you plan the party.
content
Explain why you choose this dish and how it fits your friend’s country.
structure
Put ideas in separate parts: reason, dish, invite. Use one idea per paragraph and link the parts.
language
Use simple and clear words. Check grammar and sentence form.
tone
The letter has a friendly tone and a polite closing.
content
There is an invitation to your friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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