The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

The revenue of four

cafes

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in New York for a one-year period is illustrated on the given graph.

Overall

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, the income of the

cafes

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in New York was fluctuating throughout the year. The Tea Room

Cafe

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was the only

cafe

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that earned the least

at the end

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of the year,

while

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the three other

cafes

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had the most income during that period. First of all,

Cafe

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Cool was steadily growing from January to November, except in December the revenue rose by 50%.

This

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similar condition was

also

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applied to Wi-fi

Cafe

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, except that their revenue has been spiked up since September, after it was dropped in July.

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, The Tea Room began with the highest earnings compared to the other

cafes

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, until in the winter season, it started to rapidly decline and reached the lowest value compared to the competitors. Meanwhile, Internet Express is the only

cafe

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that has had stable income for the past three months and is expected to increase in August.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

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