The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
The bar chart illustrates how much
salary
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was paid for
doctors
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and other workers in seven countries, including the US, Switzerland, Finland, Germany, the Czech
, Italy
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Republic, Italy
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, and France in 2004.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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while
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the amount of money paid for people who worked in the US was the highest, the opposite was true for
doctors
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in Finland. It is
also
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noticeable that
doctors
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’ jobs always pay far more money than other workers in seven countries in 2004.
Doctors
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’ salaries and workers’ ones were by far the highest, peaking at 120 and 43
thousand
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US
dollars
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in the US. Switzerland and France had the same doctor’s
salary
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, with 70
thousand
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US
dollars
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, the second point. Meanwhile, the amount of money paid for
doctors
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in Finland is just about 50
thousand
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US
dollars
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. In Germany,
Czech
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the Czech
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, and
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Republic, and
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Italy, the
salary
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of
doctors
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was one-third of their
worker
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workers
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.
For example
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,
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salary
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the salaries
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of
doctors
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were
paid
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apply
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about 60
thousand
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US
dollars
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and
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, and
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their other workers
was
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were
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20
thousand
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US
dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, doctors, thousand, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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