You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter ⚫ explain why you want to reduce your working hours ⚫ say which hours you would like to work ⚫ describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer

Dear Sir/

madam

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Madam

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, I am writing to request you to

combat

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consider

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my office working

hours

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because of

part time

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part-time

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study

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. I am an engineer, and I have been working with your firm for two years. When I just completed my graduation, I joined your company to gain

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apply

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experience. Now, I want to continue my

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study

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studies

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to get my master's degree. My working

hours

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are from 9 to 5, but I could not continue my

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study

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studies

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apply

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during

this

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timing

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time

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. Because I

havejoined

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have joined

my old university for evening classes,

that is

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why I would like to reduce my duty

hours

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. I want to come from 9 to 1, these

hours

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suitable

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are suitable

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for

my both

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both my

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work and

study

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when

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When

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completed

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complete

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my master's, I will have more knowledge about

profession

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the profession

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, and

also

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have more ideas for

development

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the development

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of my work.

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, I will be more productive for your firm. I hope you would understand my situation

, thank

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. Thank

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you for your concern. Yours faithfully, Rabia Rizwan.

riabia123

Sep 2, 2025

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grammar

Fix grammar and spell wrong words. Use short, clear sentences and simple form.

content

Explain how you will cover work during the shorter hours or who will help to keep tasks done.

tone

Make a more formal tone. Use 'I would like to' and 'please' for a polite request.

content

The writer states why they want to study and what hours they want.

structure

The letter shows a plan for evening class and states it may help the work later.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

162 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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