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incomes
of 3 bakeries in Calgary for Correct article usage
the incomes
ten
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ten-year
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Overall
, Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery had a similar trend for their incomes with a Linking Words
rose
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was
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the
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, Bolo Cakery Linking Words
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income
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two
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the two
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shop
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income
started to Use synonyms
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throughout the year, Replace the word
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then
remained stable for four years from 2003 to 2006 and reached its peak in 2010 by around $620000. In the meantime, Amandine Bakery's Linking Words
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begun
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began
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for the first six years by almost $60000 and rapidly grew Verb problem
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for
more than $100000.
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Moreover
, Mari Bakeshop's Linking Words
strating
point was the highest among the Correct your spelling
starting
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cakery
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fall
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