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The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many
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 were collected by the
complaints
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center
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 from a specific airline from
January
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 to June in the year 2009
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, it is clear from the graph that
whereas
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 in-person Airline
complaints
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 reached their
peak
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 throughout the period, by email/fax experienced a drop reaching their lowest point.
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, by telephone, Airline
complaints
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 were the most commonly used method at the beginning,
although
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 throughout the years, it was overtaken by in-person
complaints
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. The total number of people complaining by email or fax in
January
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 was around 700 at its
peak
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.
This
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 figure witnessed a steady drop to reach 400 in May.
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, by the telephone method from
January
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 to February faced a slight decline, reaching 800,
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 climbed to 1000 in March and remained stable before rising from April to June, reaching its
peak
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 at 1900
complaints
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.
Furthermore
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, in-person
complaints
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 were at their lowest in
January
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, before starting to rise, reaching 1200 in March and becoming the most used method, and overtaking both other methods,
then
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 reaching their
peak
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 in June with an amount of 1900
complaints
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, january, peak with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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