The debate
between
over whether it is better to have more Change preposition
apply
money
and less free Use synonyms
time
or to earn less Use synonyms
money
to have more free Use synonyms
time
is significant. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both perspectives, reasoning Linking Words
or
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and
opinion
on the matter.
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opinions
Firstly
, it is obvious that increased living standards are the Linking Words
beneficial
of having more Replace the word
benefit
money
and less free Use synonyms
time
, which Use synonyms
higher
income Correct article usage
a higher
afford
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affords
better
quality of living. Correct article usage
a better
For example
, security in accommodation prevents Linking Words
the
danger from the Correct article usage
apply
surrounding
. It allows individuals to Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
spend
a Verb problem
lead
greater
lifestyle and Correct word choice
more luxurious
also
saves Linking Words
money
from unnecessary spending. In fact, it must be exchanged for leisure Use synonyms
time
to enhance Use synonyms
higher
income. Correct article usage
a higher
Moreover
, having Linking Words
poor
work-life balance Correct article usage
a poor
due to
the risk of lack of proper rest can cause health issues at the same Linking Words
time
. The pressure of always working without enjoyment can reduce happiness and cause anxiety.
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Secondly
, earning less Linking Words
money
and having more free Use synonyms
time
, people might think itUse synonyms
a
waste of Verb problem
is a
time
,but it Use synonyms
emphasizes
the importance of work-life balance and well-being. Use the right word
emphasises
For instance
, having more Linking Words
time
allows individuals to spend quality Use synonyms
time
with family and friends, Use synonyms
it
significantly increases Correct pronoun usage
which
fulfillment
. Use the right word
fulfilment
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Furthermore
it provides opportunities for personal development by experiencing and exploring new things, new people Add a comma
Furthermore,
with
better environments Punctuation problem
, with
which
boost energy to go back to work effectively.
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, which
To conclude
, both having more Linking Words
money
and less free Use synonyms
time
and having Use synonyms
earning
less Verb problem
apply
money
and Use synonyms
having
more free Verb problem
apply
time
have their respective advantages. Higher income can afford Use synonyms
better
quality of living, security in accommodation provides safety, Correct article usage
a better
saving
from Replace the word
savings
none
unnecessary Rephrase
apply
spend
. Check wording
spending
On the other
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hand
work-life balance, personal relationships, and well-being are compelling free Add a comma
hand,
time
. Use synonyms
In
my Change preposition
From
perspective
I prefer earning less but more Add a comma
perspective,
time
because less risk to my mental health from getting anxiety and an unhealthy life.Use synonyms