The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The provided line graph illustrates the annual incomes of three bakeries, measured in Canadian Dollars, in Calgary from 2000 to 2010.
According to
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the data, a pronounced trend was reported across the bakeries, with Bolo Cakery and Amandine Bakery
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an increasing pattern,
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Mari Bakeshop saw the opposite. As shown in the figure,
initially
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in 2000, Bolo Cakery had the lowest income among all shops, at 20.000. Toward the following three years, they experienced a notable increase, almost doubled by 2003 despite facing a slight slipping in 2002.
This
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number remained relatively constant over three years, and rose significantly to more than 60.000 by the end of the period shown.
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, Amandine Bakery's income was recorded at nearly 60.000 and maintained its number over a half-decade period. Afterwards, their sales surged dramatically, soaring to just above 100.000 by 2010.
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, despite achieving the highest income in the early years, at 80.000, the sales of Mari Bakeshop dropped sharply, around half that number,
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a fluctuating trend was observed over a decade span.

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