In recent years, the number of
moving to urban cities has been increasing significantly
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population in rural areas
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lower. In my opinion, I think
is definitely a negative
. In
I will examine the reasons
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phenomenon and
my perspective.
the major reasons why
move to the
areaUse the right word
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.
,
areas are more essential
for their life. As there are more
as advanced public
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, hospitals, and schools,
many
choose to live near where they have those facilities for
betterCorrect article usage
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life quality.
, living in
urbanCorrect article usage
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canCheck wording
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experienceVerb problem
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more
activitiesCheck wording
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where
could findVerb problem
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receive various entertainment
placesCheck wording
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.
, citizens can meet up
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othersFix the agreement mistake
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at a fancy restaurant before visiting
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department store
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of the
they may dance in a romantic jazz bar.
, it is true that in the
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couldVerb problem
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find more varieties of job
that workers can easier change their
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if they
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not
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with their
recentCorrect word choice
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job. So, when
have more choices, they have more freedom to decide how they live their
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.
, leaving
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countrysidesFix the agreement mistake
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could lead to numerous drawbacks as well. First of all,
trend could widen the gap of
more and more since the government have to prioritise
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cityCorrect article usage
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centre first
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the higher
number of Fix the agreement mistake
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population.
,
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budget would be spent only
.
, the
problems in the
will
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continue because citizens are still moving into the
.
,
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cost of living in the urban
would
be roseWrong verb form
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higher and higher since the
increasingCheck wording
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demand in the
boosts
up Change preposition
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the supply.
, even though the
rental fee could be extremely costly, several
have to find a place to live and have
payVerb problem
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those
paymentFix the agreement mistake
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as they have to have somewhere to live.
In conclusion, citizens
trendUse the right word
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to move from their home town in
countrysideCorrect article usage
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and live closer to
urbanCorrect article usage
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dueCheck wording
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to the convenience,
moreCorrect article usage
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entertainmentReplace the word
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lifestyle and career
.
, I
beliveUse the right word
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that
trend is
negativeCorrect article usage
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because it causes many problems
eitherPunctuation problem
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widerCorrect article usage
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gap
ofChange preposition
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, crowed, or
highCorrect article usage
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cost of living. The
should take
initiativeCorrect article usage
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policyChange preposition
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in order to manage the
in rural areas.