More and more plastic is polluting cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve this problem?

There is no denying the fact that the impacts of extensive
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use have an impact on the environment, cities, countryside and oceans.
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essay will discuss the problems and issues that occurred
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plastic
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waste
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, and
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will express some ways to solve
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disaster.
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with,
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waste
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is polluting cities, rural areas, and oceans.
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type of
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caused two primary problems.
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, throwing
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in the oceans could harm marine creatures.
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, a study showed that 47% of turtles died
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plastic
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waste
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.
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, sea creatures could be injured by
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pieces in the ocean.
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, the use of
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in packaging food has been proven to cause the presence of tiny
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particles in human tissues, and the human body cannot get rid of them. To combat
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problem, the government should tax
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packaging, and
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they cold encouriging recycling and the reuse to reduce the impact of producing more
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products.
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, the authorities should start campaigns to spread awareness about the effects of
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waste
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.
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, in 2020, Riyadh organised a big campaign about the danger of
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waste
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to the environment and to body health.

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State your view clearly in the first paragraph and finish with a short conclusion that repeats it.
coherence
Make each paragraph center on one main idea. Start with a clear topic sentence.
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Add more detail to each idea. Give one or two easy facts or examples for support.
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Check grammar and spelling. Fix mistakes like 'cold encouragement' and tense issues.
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Use only facts you can back up. If you say a study or number, be careful and simple.
coherence
Use clear linking words to show how ideas connect, like 'First', 'Next', 'In addition', 'However'.
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The essay shows two clear problems and some solutions.
coherence
It uses linking words such as 'Firstly', 'Secondly', 'Furthermore'.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic
  • pollution
  • waste
  • animal
  • injury
  • nature
  • landscape
  • beauty
  • tourism
  • microplastics
  • water
  • food chain
  • health
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • solution
  • reduce
  • recycle
  • environment
  • danger
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