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owner
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house
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explain
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house
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house
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people
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total
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the total
owner
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have
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has
right
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privacy
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easy
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persistent
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buildings
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, and
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for
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owner
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house
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a house
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the
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also
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heirs
house
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On the other hand
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people
argue that renting a home might be a better idea. Use synonyms
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a large
compell
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cost
a huge money and it would become Wrong verb form
costs
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a financial
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, the tenants have more money to spend Linking Words
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a new
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therefore
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tenants
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have
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has
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house
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limited
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the chance
house
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bound
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which
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maintenance
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payment.
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advantage
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my perspective, I Change preposition
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disgree
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disagree
to
having a Change preposition
with
house
because Use synonyms
people
nowadays are Use synonyms
freely
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free
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around the world, so they do not have to be Use the right word
elsewhere
at
the same place Change preposition
in
and
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, and
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on
instead
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in
house
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parents
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their parents
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house
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the house