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Nowadays it is possibe to use computers and moblie phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, as everybody knows, the
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 as artificial intelligence, is getting
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better and one of the things that you can do with the
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 you can even use it to speak with other people in a different language. To be
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 I think that the
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 a person pays way more attention than a software
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 he is able to adapt to
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 you write what you need
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 it is going to solve it
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 it will never do a perfect
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 my suggestion is to always review a
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 you could send to your boss or to your clients a mistaken work. At
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task response
Make your view clear in the first paragraph and say what you will talk about.
style
Use short, clear sentences for each idea. Avoid long runs on.
structure
Add one or two exact examples to show your point.
conclusion
End with a simple line that restates your view.
content
The writer keeps a clear view and shares their own idea.
style
The text is easy to read with simple form.
structure
There are two main ideas that stay the same.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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