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The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016. #134

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016. #134
The table presents the sales data for a restaurant in Vancouver, broken down by its three branches in 2016.
Overall
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, the Georgia
Street
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branch
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 showed the highest figures in terms of
transactions
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 and revenue. At Georgia
Street
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, a total of 854
transactions
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 were recorded, with chicken burgers being the most frequently purchased item. Of these, 449 were takeaways and 405 were dine-in orders.
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,
this
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branch
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 generated the largest revenue among the three, totalling $10.69.
By comparison
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, the
Dunsmuir
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Street
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branch
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 handled 750
transactions
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,
while
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 the
Drake
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Street
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branch
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 only recorded 390.
However
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, despite fewer
transactions
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,
Drake
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 generated more earnings than
Dunsmuir
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, at $9.02 versus $5.61. Among the food items, chicken wings were the best-selling dish at
Dunsmuir
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,
whereas
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 chicken pasta led sales at
Drake
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. Dining patterns
also
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 showed differences. At
Drake
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, dine-in orders (200) slightly outnumbered takeaways (190),
while
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 at
Dunsmuir
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, takeaways (392) were marginally more frequent than eat-in
transactions
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 (358).

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words street, branch, transactions, dunsmuir, drake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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