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Writing Samples
Band 3

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recyle more of their waste?

In recent years, the question of whether governments should ensure that a law for household waste is recycled has been widely debated.
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 some contend that only legislation can compel people to put waste in the appropriate place. I strongly disagree with the former notion that governments should introduce laws requiring people to manage waste, because plastic can spread various diseases to both animals and humans.
This
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 essay will elucidate my perspective with supportive arguments before reaching a conclusion.
To begin
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 with, these days people are more educated, they have a lot of knowledge about reprocessed materials, but some folks have a busy schedule and do not want to spend time recycling products
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task
Make your main idea clear in the first paragraph and end with a short final line that restates your view.
task
Give two to three small, easy reasons and add a short example for each to show how your reason works.
language
Check grammar and make sentences short so they are easy to read.
coherence
Use one main idea per paragraph and use simple linking words to move from one idea to the next.
stance
The writer takes a clear side on the issue.
structure
There is a plan shown in the intro.
coherence
Some linking words help flow in places (To begin with).

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • waste
  • law
  • rules
  • government
  • home
  • sort
  • bin
  • collection
  • convenience
  • education
  • awareness
  • rewards
  • fines
  • enforcement
  • habits
  • norms
  • cost
  • benefit
  • plan
  • monitor
  • support
  • culture
  • communication
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