The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the modification of the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
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, the grassland areas were removed to make way for the construction of
building
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the building
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. In 1930, Stokeford village had just large green spaces
such
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as gardens.
Moreover
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, the farmland was used for cattle grazing
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, and
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there were some residential areas and other buildings in the village ,
such
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as houses, a post office and a primary school.
In addition
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, a medium-sized river and a bridge were located in the north-west of the area. Until 2010, the suburb had been developed slightly, because many
building
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buildings
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were erected
instead
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of
territory
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the territory
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.
For example
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, the large house with gardens was redeveloped into a retirement home.
Moreover
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, the primary school was modernised, a short way and
regular
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a regular
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apartment constructed
as a result
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of demolishing the two shops.
It is clear that
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some changes were introduced in the space,
while
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the River Stoke and the bridge have remained the same.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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