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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has always been a debate about whether it is better to work for large corporations or smaller businesses. Personally, I believe that both options have their advantages
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 the preference often depends on an individual’s career and goals. There are undeniable benefits of working for big companies. First of all, they provide employees with essential skills and valuable experience. Being employed by market leaders makes people more competitive, broadens their knowledge and tests their ability to handle pressure like no other environment can.
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, it is no secret that large firms are often extremely demanding, especially during peak seasons. And
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 for some people it is a valuable opportunity for growth, others might not be ready for
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 of intensity.
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, starting in a small company may be more suitable for some people
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 advantageous in general. Smaller firms usually offer a more flexible working environment and allow employees to take on diverse responsibilities.
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 not only helps newcomers to adapt at their own pace, but
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 gives them a broader and deeper understanding of different aspects of business operations.
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, smaller companies often foster closer relationships among colleagues, which helps to create a supportive and motivating atmosphere.
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,
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 businesses are less likely to provide you with great financial support
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 big corporations. In conclusion, both large and small companies have unique benefits.
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 big firms provide extensive experience, skills development, career prospects and financial stability, smaller ones can offer flexibility and an easier, friendlier environment.
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, I believe that
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 a choice ultimately depends on a person’s ambitions, plans and personal preferences.

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task response
Be clear about your main view in the first sentence and keep the same position throughout the essay.
content
Add one real example from work life to show your point more clearly.
coherence
Use short and simple linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'also', 'but', 'however','in addition').
grammar
Break long sentences into shorter ones to help the reader follow your ideas.
content
Try to use more concrete facts like pay, growth, or team notes to back up ideas.
structure
The essay has a clear start, middle and end.
idea
It gives both sides and a final view.
coherence
There are good links between ideas.
lexical
The topic is well kept and fit for the task.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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