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What are the advantages and disadvatages of online learning.

The
educations
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educational
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 methods are
chenging
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changing
. The majority of countries have a good internet
conection
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connection
.
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this
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 reason
nowdays
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nowadays
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is
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it is
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 more common that traditional
methodos
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methods
 are transformed to be used for more people. Students have
differet opcion
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different options
 for
study
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, they can
be
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decide
for
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on
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 online courses or
face to face
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face-to-face
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. In
this
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 essay, I try to
explaine
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explain
advantages
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the advantages
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 and disadvantages of online
leaning
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learning
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. To
the
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apply
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beggin
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begin
,
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study
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studying
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remot
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remotely
 from wherever
on
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in
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 the
word
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world
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,
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apply
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 is the most important point for learning online. Students can
acess
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access
 without
needed
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needing to
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 move to a campus,
this
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 is an important
adventage
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advantage
. In
effect
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effect,
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this
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 option should
less cost
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cost less
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 of the
study
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 for
citizen
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citizens
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 with
slow
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low
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 salaries.
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,
internet
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the internet
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 can
be
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go to rural areas with deficient transport systems.
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, the distance learner
have
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has
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 to have
additionals
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additional
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qualifies
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qualifications
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. Educatives
kills
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such
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 as time management and
self- discipline
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self-discipline
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 are crucial to
sucess
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success
on
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in
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the
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a
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 career.
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, not everything activities that the student should be
realiced
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involved
 in
the
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at the
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 university can be
doing in
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done
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 a
house
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home
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.
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, the laboratory experiments need
a
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apply
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specific
equiments
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equipment
. In conclusion, if the student
have
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has
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a
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apply
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determination and focus
in
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on
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 their own
growing
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growth
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, online courses are a good option. They can
decided
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decide
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thier schudule
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their schedule
 and location for
study
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.
However
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, if the student
need
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needs
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 more support
of
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to
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keep
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stay
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concentreted
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concentrated
 can be
better
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a better
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 option
go
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to go
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 to the university.

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content
In your next essay, keep one main idea in each paragraph and add more detail for it.
structure
Make a strong topic sentence for each paragraph and use connecting words like 'first', 'also', 'but', 'for example' to link ideas.
grammar
Watch for spelling and word use. Use easy words and simple grammar.
lexical
Check common spellings and use the right form of words. Keep to simple, clear wording.
practice
Practice short essays on the same topic and read easy IELTS text.
structure
The essay shows an overall shape with introduction, body and conclusion.
content
Some ideas are shown with examples to back points.
content
The writer tries to discuss both sides of online learning.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • access
  • variety
  • courses
  • cost-effective
  • skill development
  • time management
  • self-discipline
  • technology
  • responsibilities
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