The graph below show the average lenght of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for diffreernt age groups in privet and publis hospitals in Queensland, Australia

The graph illustrates the average number of days spent in hospital during the

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year because of serious injuries for different ages in private or public hospitals in the Australian city, Queensland.

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, the groups have a similar pattern with few exceptions, usually the length of stay in

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hospital was much higher

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some fluctuations with inconsistencies in the gaps between the two. Until the

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of 15, all seriously injured people went to public hospitals. At the

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of 15-29, the numbers drastically increased, from 9 to 30 and 35 to 49 for the public only.

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the numbers continuously declined for both except for the

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40-44 when the days at public hospitals suddenly increased, slightly touching the number of 60,

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the private is barely 20 days of stay. For every

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group except 85+, the public hospital stay is longer. At the

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of 15 to

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the gap was quite large, especially 40-44. And

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the average stay gap drastically started to narrow down from 50-80, at the

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og 65-69 , the stay was almost the same.