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Band 2

The diargam below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The Diagram Explains
about
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the cycle of stages that are needed when publishing a
book
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. There are about 9 steps, beginning with a writing permission to publish a
book
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 and
end
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 with distribution to
bookstore
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a bookstore
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. For
all
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the
process
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entire process
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 that
needs it
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 to publish a
book
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 is approximately between 18-24 months.
To begin
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 with, first you need to write a
story
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 of the
book
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 and send it to a publisher by letter,
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secondly
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 the publishing house will study your writing of your
story
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 with the editors.
Moreover
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, when the editors finish studying your
story
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, they will make a contract with
writers
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the writers
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 about publishing the
book
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.
Next
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 you will work
together with
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 the editors about the design layout that you want to
visualize
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 in your
book
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. Moving on to
the next step is
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final
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the final
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 visual layout of the books
,
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additionally
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 the publisher house will be printing your
story
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into
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a
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paper and binding
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 together.
Finally
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, after all that hard work,
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the publisher
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publisher
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publisher's
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 house will distribute your books
into
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variety
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a variety
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bookstores
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of bookstores
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 all around the place.

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structure
Add a short intro that says what the diagram shows, and end with a short end line.
structure
List the steps in clear order using words like first, next, then, finally.
grammar
Use short, plain sentences. Do not run too long; one idea per sentence.
vocabulary
Check small word use like 'publisher house' and 'story' to stay right.
vocabulary
Be exact with facts, for example the time (18-24 months).
style
Keep to the point and cut extra words.
structure
Good use of order words (first, second, finally) to show steps.
content
The text mentions a time line for the work.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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