A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible dasadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Angela, How are you doing ? I hope you are fine. I am writing to you

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letter to

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give advice on the camping holiday you are planning to go

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I strongly believe that you will enjoy

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camping holiday because it is your first time.I know how you always love to travel ,and

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will be an interesting vacation.I remember when when watched a movie together where some friends went camping

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you enjoyed it

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you

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that you would love to go camping one day.

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clearly explains why I know you will find it interesting.

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,you need to know that there may be some disadvantages

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particular type of trip.

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kind of trip can be very dangerous, especially if you go alone.

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is because

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you can be attacked by

armbed

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armed

robbers

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wild animals.

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,it is safer to go with a friend. I would love to join you

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summer for

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trip

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I have still not

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up with my project work.My supervisor has given me a deadline to submit my work.I will

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not be able to join you. Thanks for understanding

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warmest regards to your siblings,especially your kid sister Yvonne. Your Friend, Esther

estherduah39

Sep 11, 2025

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structure

Put one main idea in each paragraph and keep ideas clear.

grammar

Fix spelling and grammar mistakes like armbed -> armed, finish up -> finished.

conventions

Use short and simple sentences. Use only easy words.

tone

Be clear about if you can join or not in a kind way.

tone

Friendly tone and kind closing.

content

Gives reasons why camping can be fun.

content

Shows she cares by asking about the friend and sending regards.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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