Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer. Other students prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher. Consider the advantages of both options, and make an argument for the way the students should organise their schedule.

Nowadays, especially after the spread of

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, a

lot

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of students are used to studying online

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of going to school. As we are going to see in the next two

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new form of school has many advantages but

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many disadvantages. To be honest, as I was at university during the pandemic and so I lived that period as a student,

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so I

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prefer to go to school or to university

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of staying at

home

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in my bedroom without seeing anyone. In fact, during the pandemic

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me staying at

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was really bad, first of all because I was not used to it and second of all because I am a really sociable person and, of

course

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I wanted and needed to see and chat with all my friends. At the same time, even if I disagree with them, I understand those people who prefer staying at

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and doing everything

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. As I said

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before,

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I have always preferred to study and to work in

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, but, as you probably know, for a

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of companies and

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for universities

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possibility to

organize

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organise

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lessons, exams or meetings online or even the possibility that someone can work from

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home

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are advantages. In fact, nowadays, companies but

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universities have a

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of problems

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space, as they don't know where to put their students or their workers, and with

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"smart working, they solved all

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this

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problems. Let's think about all those companies, in which every worker has to

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work

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at least 2 days a week from

home

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. At the same time,

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nowadays known

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"smart working" has a

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of disadvantages, first of all, as I said before, you don't interact with other people, so you have to be ready to stay at

home

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alone and in silence. In the

mean time

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meantime

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, I think that, especially at the beginning, doing a

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of smart working doesn't help you in your professional growth. In conclusion, I would like to say that working from

home

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could be good

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it could

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be a bad thing

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it all depends on your job and on you.