Two figures below demonstrate
that
the total Correct word choice
apply
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
the
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apply
athelets
and the number of two genders who have played in the Olympic Correct your spelling
athletes
games
from 1924 to 2012.
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Games
Overall
, there is a significant growth Linking Words
of
the total Change preposition
in
numbers
of athletes Fix the agreement mistake
number
and
both sexes are elevated during the period, especially after 1984.
The total participants Punctuation problem
, and
were
just over 3000 people Correct subject-verb agreement
was
and
most of them were males in 1924. Punctuation problem
, and
Then
, a Linking Words
gradually
growth brought the total number of players over 4000, and only Replace the word
gradual
first
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the first
qualter
of them were females. The total number of that in 1984 had a gradual increase in males, which Correct your spelling
quarter
over
6000, but only over 1000 Verb problem
was over
of
female Change preposition
apply
athlets
Correct your spelling
athletes
presented
in the game. Verb problem
participated
In addition
, nearly 6000 Linking Words
of
men had seen in Change preposition
apply
Olympic
games in 2012, Correct article usage
the Olympic
while
nearly 5000 Linking Words
of
women joined the event Change preposition
apply
which
was a substantial Punctuation problem
, which
elevation
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increase
compare
to 1000 female individuals in 1984.Wrong verb form
compared