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Some charts are used to show predictions of the future, estimates of the past and projections of the future

Some charts are used to show predictions of the future, estimates of the past and projections of the future
The line chart illustrates the number of vehicles manufactured in
China
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,
UK
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the UK
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, Japan and
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USA
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the USA
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 between 2020 and 2035.
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,
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USA
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the USA
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 and
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china
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China
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shows
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show
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 a significant downward trend in producing new
cars
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while
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, while
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 there was a gradual
deacrese
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decrease
 in
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USA
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the USA
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.
In addition
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,
China
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 displays a dramatic increase over
the
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apply
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time. Japan was the
leading
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 in the field of
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cars
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car
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 production in 2020 with around 350000
cars
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 and
start
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started
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 to rise after five years to nearly
355000
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355000,
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then
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 declined
gardually
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gradually
 to 1000000 in 2035.
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USA
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The USA
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 and
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 came behind Japan with 300000 and 200000
cars
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 respectively
than
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then
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 started to fall over the years to almost the
lower
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lowest
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 point.
in
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In
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 2020,
China
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 showed an upward trend
staring
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starting
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 with 100000
vehicle
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vehicles
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and
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, and
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 it will reach its peak in 2035 with 170000
cars
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approximatelly
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approximately
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words china, usa, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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