The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
The bar chart presents the proportion of Canadian
residents
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who visited different destinations within Canada,
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three resident categories.
Overall
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, the cinema was the most popular place, with
Canadian-born
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residents
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making up the majority of visitors.
On the other hand
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, the theatre remained the least popular destination among all groups. Approximately 70% of
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residents
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went to the cinema, compared with 65% of new migrants from English-speaking countries and 50% of those from other countries.
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, the majority of new migrants from other nations visited the library, accounting for 55%.
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, the figures for
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residents
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and those from English-speaking states were lower, at around 37% for the former and 40% for the latter. Meanwhile,
public
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from English-speaking nations accounted for the largest shares of theatre and zoo attendance (to 25% and 50%, respectively), followed by
Canadian-born
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people (20% and 42%).
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, people from other states consistently recorded the lowest percentages, with 10% for the theatre and approximately 35% for the zoo.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, canadian-born with synonyms.
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